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With my editor hat on, looking at your pencils and then inked pages, I think you have a tendency to over ink your work, which means the final page loses the dynamic of the pencils. My advice would be to look at inkers such as Al Williamson and Jim Lee's inking: while Williamson is more of an 'oldie' the basics of what should and shouldn't be inked on clothing and hair, in particular, still hold true.

That said, you are making good use of solid blacks in the bedroom scene. Maybe the inking style is your personal choice. Hope this is useful.